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Miles Away by ~Flare-Knight:iconFlare-Knight:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Spoken Word


I'll do the best I can to see you're happy, even though we live so many miles apart

You are a very important friend to me, and will always be in my heart

As young as I am, I'm not sure I could do a lot

But I will just have to give it everything I got
©2008-2009 ~Flare-Knight
:iconflare-knight:

Author's Comments

This was something I wrote this morning to a friend very dear to me. Though we live so very far apart, I would like to do the best I can to make sure she is happy.

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*Moontoon Apr 20, 2008, 11:36:53 PM
Thank you so very much :hug: First time someone writes a poem for me ^__^ It's so sweet.

--
Große Wünsche sind Still,
bis sie endlich jemand weckt.
Und der Freund den ich will
hat sich in meinem Wunsch versteckt.
:iconflare-knight:
~Flare-Knight Apr 20, 2008, 11:42:43 PM
You're welcome ^^ :hug:

--
Time is a major factor in your destiny and fate. When you decide to do something and how you use your time will affect your success or downfall.
Use time to your advantage or it will be your destruction.
:iconmidori-kitty:
~midori-kitty Apr 21, 2008, 2:39:28 PM
So cute...^-^

--
dorodorodorodorodorodorodoro
:iconflare-knight:
~Flare-Knight Apr 21, 2008, 10:00:22 PM
*blushes* thank you

--
Time is a major factor in your destiny and fate. When you decide to do something and how you use your time will affect your success or downfall.
Use time to your advantage or it will be your destruction.
:iconmidori-kitty:
~midori-kitty Apr 22, 2008, 1:16:14 PM
I'll favorite it as soon as I get on a computer that can favorite pictures. ^-^
(Mine is just too mean...-_-' )

--
dorodorodorodorodorodorodoro
:iconnevermore1818:
~Nevermore1818 Apr 22, 2008, 2:52:26 PM
That is another very sweet poem by you.
I think you are very good at the heart felt
poems.

--
Sunshine and Rainy Weather
Go Hand and Hand Together
:iconflare-knight:
~Flare-Knight Apr 22, 2008, 2:54:12 PM
They just seem so.. natural for me.

And thank you.

--
Time is a major factor in your destiny and fate. When you decide to do something and how you use your time will affect your success or downfall.
Use time to your advantage or it will be your destruction.
:iconnevermore1818:
~Nevermore1818 Apr 22, 2008, 3:27:45 PM
That's cool. I don't like to write heart felt poems [and post them haha] because I find that a lot of people assume...
I should though. I think it would suprize a lot of people...
As long as nobody assumes.

But I do really like your poetry.

PS this is not an innuendo. you aren't the kind of person to jump to conclusions. and i dont mean it like that. Im just saying.

--
Sunshine and Rainy Weather
Go Hand and Hand Together
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